I'm sorry, but you take way too long introducing the video series. A minute and a half of the video should not be used as an introduction, its just boring. Of course, the video itself needs some introduction, but you just dragged it out way to long, with few jokes put in to make it worthwhile. The only thing I was thinking was a plain "Get on with it", in the style of Monty Python, of course. So, in the future, I'd suggest you keep the long introduction in the video summery, and just be quick in the actual video. Also, you said there was going to be humor, but the jokes in Part I were just too far placed between each other, it didn't really seem funny, and since you were only doing YouTube comments, not very entertaining for me, as I do not have an account there. I know you were trying to be helpful, but going into detail how to make a game was just honestly boring. Part II and III were much better than part I, as they had much more jokes than the first one. I especially loved your rant on NeverNegitive, that was hilarious, but I do have a little peeve about the videos. You say "Uh" way too many times. It continuously, uh, slows down, uh, the, uh, point you, uh, are trying to, uh, make. Okay, that was an exaggeration, but the video is slowed down by your pauses, whether it is caused by "Uh"s or other things. Streamlining it is a very important thing in a video, see Nostalgia Critic, AVGN, or Linkara (All three talented reviewers, one movies, one games, one comic books, respectfully. I recommend all three of them to everyone, especially Linkara, whom is my favorite of the three, and I don't even read comic books.) for an example. The average video of the three of them is about 20 minutes, but yet they don't do anything unnecessary in their review at all. Imagine if they paused constantly or ramble on one thing for a while without even a single joke put in. They would be way into the 40s, at least, and wouldn't be entertaining. Just food for thought.